Lol....I think it would be best for you to move on to like...short..short..short poems or somthing...stories don't seem to be working out. :?

This topic is now closed. I will no longer respond to it or follow it.
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*breaks through the window*

*grabs the thread's cash register*

*breaks through another window to get out*

*runs down the forum laughing*

Lol...this forum has gone through so many names.


But its better you hear the truth from us takita. The first step of success is get people's opinions who are not freinds or family.

So now you can work to improve to become a good writer and then get rich and what not.

Don't forgot about where you found the constructive criticism... thats right... here at pcplayground.com we accept donations. :)

And from nerdhelp.com We accept cars and mansions, and small migrant workers.

Why are you so sad? When and if you publish I will read your book.


Little Molly's sister
also known as little molly 8O :oops:

Hehe molly...you liar .

Unless you're not...then touché.

i kinda sorta stopped reading it after the third sentence, im too lazy to read it. now if i can move my hand to the mouse and hit submit... oh well i'l just hit tab over there